Writing 201: Poetry (Day 2 – Acrostic, Simile) 06 Tuesday Oct 2015 Posted by Major Reneé Marie, USAR Retired ‘17 in Poetry ≈ 9 Comments Tagswriting201 Is Everything OK? P owerful, like people who sometimes take A ction to their own benefit I nitiating more sorrow N ow instantly S hared – because INFORMation moves INstantly NOW. Art and Poem – © Reneé Marie Share this: Truth Worth SharingTwitterFacebookLike Loading... Related
Jarrod Brown said:
Initiating more sorrow.
From a person that has learned not to fight their own battles, that is the best line of the poem to me. Great job!
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ReneeMarie60 said:
Thank you so much, Jarrod! My heart writes on “auto pilot” and sometimes it lands well ~ especially when I deeply LISTEN.
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Maggie C said:
I like the way you weave your concepts back and forth. Great wordsmithing.
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ReneeMarie60 said:
Thank you so much, Maggie! My heart writes on “auto pilot” and sometimes it lands well :o)
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Cathy Lynn Brooks said:
Painful.
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ReneeMarie60 said:
I suppose so, Cathy. It’s quite universal. My heart writes on “auto pilot” and sometimes it lands well :o)
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rosemawrites said:
So true. So curreny. So now.
Nice!
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ReneeMarie60 said:
Thank you so much, Rose! My heart writes on “auto pilot” and sometimes it lands well. What does “so currency” mean? just curious.
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rosemawrites said:
You’re welcome! 😀 Oh, it’s “so current”. 🙂
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